Warhorse: Characterization
Describe a character from the book.
The person
who i would like to describe is a teenage boy. The character has a close
relationship with joey. It’s obviously that I speak about Albert. He is very
sensitive towards animals. How he deals with joey is very impressive. Albert is
a person who never does anyone any harm.
Albert is separated from his best friend Joey and I think that’s not a easy
situation for him. The most beautiful expressive of Albert is that he want to
go with joey in the war. And this shows that Albert give everything for someone
he loves. And I found this is a forceful personality from Albert.
I think he
is a very humble man. I would imagine that Albert is very simply dressed. He lives on a farm
with his drunken grandfather Albert has often to work on the farm but I think
when Albert can work with Joey than isn’t as troublesome as when he has to work
alone.
All in one
I found Albert is a honest, faithful and animal-loving man.
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Very detailed description of Albert as a character! Well done!
AntwortenLöschenFor your future writing, make sure to pay more attention to diction (=choice of words).
You wrote, for example, "the most beautiful expressive of Albert". After "the most beautiful" you need to put a noun and "expressive" is not a noun but an adjective.